2- Anstey 
on Jan. 12 2008
Hey Kee,
This is a good piece. I'd be interested to see how that would hold up without the intro. I think it'd be fine. I enjoyed the background information though. Which makes me think, perhaps, it should be worked into the poem. Just a thought.
Fondly,
stephan
3- Kzealy on Jan. 12 2008
Stephan I will look at working the comment into the body, I am not sure how it will work, so I am going to post as it a separate entry when i am done. Thanks for the comment.
----- No one Can make you feel inferior without your consent.
No one Can make you feel inferior without your consent.
1- Rene'
on Jan. 12 2008
Given the explanation before the poem, it all rigns through loud and clear. You did a great job with the pain and expectations of 'Waiting for the Fall'. One misspelling, 'dieing' should be 'dying'(it is one those strange little verbs that goes outside the rules!). Well written!
----- could someone turn the world back over, I'm getting dizzy!
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!