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Hey Kee,
This is a good piece. I'd be interested to see how that would hold up without the intro. I think it'd be fine. I enjoyed the background information though. Which makes me think, perhaps, it should be worked into the poem. Just a thought.
Fondly,
stephan
by Anstey on Jan. 12 2008