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More in On verdant Fields of Lavender Discuss: On verdant Fields of LavenderCapricious gaze fixates For an eternity moment On verdant fields of lavender Sweet musk essence blooms Catalyze emotions into a frothy Tempest frenzy While images dance of smiling days with you Rain smell imminent erupts A pungent mix of scents As stormy tears a glisten Drop gentle patters Glycerin decorate lavender seas Scrambled egg angst appeased Sweet musk essence blooms Day dreams of years with you |
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on Mar. 17 2007
A perfect beginning, the "capricious gaze fixates".
Such a capturing of how suddenly the surprising scent, and a rush of memory. The "frothy Tempest frenzy" is the results (wonderful too). Ah and "glisten" as a noun. Ordinarily we think of the verb, but it can ne a noun (and a very active one). The "Srambled egg angst" is unusual... I started thinking about that. It does make sense...especially for a dewy morning breakfast scene? Any other allusions? The tears mix with the moistness of the scene and its depth goes beyond the moment into years.