Da Da

Ah.  Da Da as opposed to dada? Tight, compact, and seems quite deliberate. I don't know what to say but I like it.  I think the brevity works extremely well and corresponds nicely to the cosmic aspect of the poem, esp when compared to the human life spanning the universe's life span.  Very short and beautiful. I'd return to this and rework the last line in some way...but I can't give you any suggestions, it just seems out of proportion with the rest of this gem.