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Maybe it should stay as a prose piece. Then, start another, totaly new and fresh poem with this piece as a step toward what you really want to express. Dig deeper into yourself: what did you really feel...what were the brief thoughts...that cut into...freeze those in a poem. I love the concept. Think about it more...it helps. Mira M.
by Mira on Jan. 27 2008