We All Have a Breaking Point

I love the mood/tone set by this one Rene, it defintely gets the reader to look inward both to themselves and the spaces between the lines.

The sense of frustration is coherent and sticks to the mind like a limpet mine, one senses that it could blow at any moment.

On top of this, one is given pause to wonder at the cause of such a malaise. Hints are given, though they are very open to the interpretation of the reader. This I consider a good thing, as it allows the experiences of the reader to meld with the words, thus creating an even deeper impression on the reader.

Excellent Rene, keep them coming!

Mos.