Without

I've looked at this one a number of times - very appealing and ambiguous.  I like the contrary juxtaposition of all these images without immediate meaning.  It really could be anything, which I think is the strength of the poem.  I chuckled when I read what you said about the poem coming to you while you were watching your grandson play at the pizza place.

As far as comments on the site, or individual poems, that stuff comes and goes.  Have fun while the fun is happening.  As long as people are writing, that's the key.  And you've been very prolific lately Rene.  Its been an an inspiration.