Organic and Red Lace

I like fantasy in this context, with it on one line and then football team on the next, it gives a double meaning to the first stanza. In the 2nd line, how about using 'in' instead of 'out of', it increases the chance of double meaning for 'come' which seems to go with the rest of the poem quite well.

in stanza 2, L3, you could do without 'away', just for the sake of flow and it won't change the meaning at all. The rest of this is really amazing! 

----- just wandering the maze of hallways in my bent mind!