The Other Women In My Life(finally made up my mind and even changed the title!

i wish I knew how to get people to commenting. I have tried doing so in kind, and it has had little response. You and Alcuin about the only ones that I find doing so. When I read your poetry, I find so little that I feel could be changed but I love reading it. Hopefully, my friends (from school) will be back from their vacations soon and then we can get some workshopping going on here.

I am not entirely happy with this piece yet so I will sit on it a while and then maybe changes will come to me. The idea is going in the right direction but the words haven't shown themselves to me as of yet. Thank you again Leanne... 

----- just wandering the maze of hallways in my bent mind!