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Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
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Just one more obvious spot that I can see -- the punctuation in the first stanza needs addressing, eg: The glass was full. The only comparisons I can think to make here are with Plath's writing -- and where she was all woe is me and gosh it's hard, your words are strong and empowering. Been downtrodden, got new boots, making your own footprints.
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