An Importance of Mint Imperials

No, I'm not sure, I just remember you saying you were going to edit -- the edits I'd make myself are personal choices, for example I find "he's a lovely man" to be superfluous.  The "Mother may I?" lines don't seem right to me either (I quite liked the continual shoe mentions, because of the absurdity).  I do think the last two stanzas are exceptionally strong.