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The ending of this surprised me, made it rich. A valuable, instructive poem for those who judge addicts of any kind.
I'm not sure about some of the language, which feels stilted or almost too proper, e.g., rigidness (firmness, tautness?) , terrorizing (tantalizing, teasing?).
Nice write, Rene.
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by Tracey on Oct. 16 2007