Drifting

"Madrigals" is a good word. I had to look it up to refresh my memory. It's a perfect fit to the intended imagery.

Perhaps I'm wrong, but I think there should be a comma after "blue".

I also like to write of the transitions between day and night. I've always found them both to be beautiful times. I guess I'm a change person - I like fall and spring the most.

Alcuin