blind men in the park

I like the style of writing. It's economic and concise, using salient ingredients
to convey image and meaning; and it is lucid which allows the poem to communicate vividly.
The darkness of the blind plays with that wider light and dark of daylight and night; and the
piece hints at other aspects of darkness. It presents a paradox where the darkness of the blind
is associated with light. There's a humanity at the heart of this which appeals. Rgds.,Alan.