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Thanks Shannon! Is this better, for stanza #2? Or do you think I ought to just delete it?:

Its true that opposites attract
And cast a fleeting spell
But used to vanquish emptiness
Then opposites repel
i know what you mean re: the other line. I've struggled alot with that one. originally, it was "I proffer all that I be"...a small part of the problem is that I don't know which syllable gets the accent in "proffer". I guess I oughtta use my dictionary (duh!)