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Tidal currents? Water lillies grow in ponds, perhaps some lakes - not in tidal waters. OK, am I being too literal? I realize you intended this to be a never-ending sentence - that it's not something inadvertent - but I'm wondering why. What is the intended effect? Perhaps you thought of it as a constant flow of water, or perhaps as more graceful than division into sentences. I'm trying to understand your intentions before I comment. Was this supposed to be surrealism? I'd like to know your intentions in writing it as one long sentence of successive images.
Alcuin
by Alcuin of York on Aug. 10 2007