The Garages

Alan, many welcomes!  I'm suspecting that small accent differences are causing the problems I have with the meter here, since it's always on lines with words that can be drawn out more than I would do.  So, I'm not worried... except for S1, L2, which keeps bugging me for being too long and I'd suggest getting rid of "those".  The caesura allows the grammar to work despite dropping a word.  Actually, S3 L3 gives me the same problem, how does it work for you if you change "springing" to "spring"?  But all things considered, this is a really enjoyable read.