The Connection

Hey Rene, I really like the message here, the undeniable connections between certain people, even if their connection doesn't do either soul any (obvious) good. I'm not wild about the delivery just yet. I think there's more cliche than not. If I were you I'd stick with it -- those kinds of connections are fascinating & maddening which you only touch on ever so slightly in your last stanza. More of that, please.