The Shoes

Bowing low and thanking you deeply for such an in depth critique on this piece. I was on the verge of leaving the site after being away from it for about a month as I was extremely discouraged by a lack of response from anyone else on here.

I spent weeks pouring over others work and trying to give responsible and caring critiques only to have none done in return. You have revived my hope on here. For that I thank you immensely.

I do love the changes you suggested and will go and look at implementing them right now. You are also correct in the statement that the personal meaning of the piece to me means nothing to the reader as far as the meaning of the poem....it's just that the little blank box asking for some kind of insight into the poem was begging to be filled (lol).

Again, many thanks....Rene'