Rainstorm

This has a nice beat except for the "written" lines. They seem a bit awkward. Perhaps using "writ" would improve it. The repetition of the last pairs of each stanz'a lines gives me mixed feelings. It seems a bit like filler, and a too easy rhyme; on the other hand, it makes the poem more self-reflective.

Overall, I liked this, and liked the efficient use of storm elements as metaphors.

Alcuin