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You know I love your Vietnam poetry, Norm. Short, powerful pieces. With this one, I'm wondering if something about the gassing should be in the title so that the end of the poem leads back up to it. Know what I mean? I think it might work better than having an "explanatory bit" at the end.
by Tracey on Jul. 13 2007