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I understand and agree with the comments above. To them I'd add: I think it would strengthen the piece to describe, whether in detail or not, what's featured in the photo. Was it a group or a couple? Is the photo black and white or aged color? Also - why "dumb?" Though any reader could fill in the blanks, I'd like to know your reason for choosing that word. I also finding myself wondering why it would be important to remember more. Just because...? At the same time, I do indeed like the last stanza. Just a few thoughts to consider.
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