May 16, 2025
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my god, Austin.
i particularly enjoyed 4... and 1. and 5, for that matter. I guess i didn't dislike any of it. I loved the line "and this is my God -- he has no name". It stuck with me for some reason.
in your long poem, the only thing that bothered me the slightest was the second line of what i think is your introduction. (the italicized part) What bothered me was that little "it" at the end. But maybe it's worded that way for a reason.
p.s. I love your work. We should meet up some time.
by Desde debajo on June 29 2007
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