I think of you

thanks for chiming in. i'm wishy-washy (don't you love that not-word?) about the dashes because i definitely liked them when i had originally hand-written the poem, but i'm rethinking them right now... maybe it's the font.
leanne was very right about the fact that there are little meanings to the words i use, mostly to myself, and that tends to be a problem of mine. i end up getting stuck on particular words because they have their own little meanings to me and i can't think of any other way to describe something. in actuality, they may or may not sound good when put into context.
for this poem in particular, i'm going to indulge myself and leave the cliche "blood-red passion" as-is. in any other poem, i'd probably ignore my own little meaning, but this one is very specifically what i want to say.