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i'm assuming the sense of a wave is reflective of the aforementioned tide. I think it works. I'm not sold on the dashes. I think the effect works as well without them. The only phrase that sort of warblated in my ear was the 'blood-red' -- it sniffed a bit cliche. Otherwise, I enjoyed this.
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- stephan
by Anstey on June 27 2007