The Narrator Observes his Reader

technically, I love what you're attempting here and aesthetically, I like the poem quite a bit.  The fact that your metrical exercise is mostly inobtrusive to the way the poem reads is a big plus - it has a very natural cadence.  the only place where it falls down for me is when you split "alluring" between the two lines.  but overall?  nice job.  The title (and how the poem plays it out) is wonderful.