Sonnet of the Young Man

the line "My frailty tempests" doesn't work too well I think, due to the fact it should be 'frail tempests' -- frailty is a noun, not an adjective.

I also wonder about the verb, "felt" in L3. wouldn't it be 'knew' or 'understood' - it's not an empathy as much as an epiphany it would seem to me. Therefor you want to show understanding of Job. more than a connection to Job. 

All in all, i love the idea of this, simply because I find it so relatable -- having, believe it or not, been a young man once. 

• stephan