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first of all this is good, the impact is ery powerful. I think what you write in the comments, about the 16 dying should be worked into the poem, the impact would be even greater.
I LOVE stanza 2, it's perfect. And says so much about life.
I look forward to reading more.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
I LOVE stanza 2, it's perfect. And says so much about life.
I look forward to reading more.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shannon McEwen on June 8 2007