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Quite shamelessly bumping this up. I've reworked a bit, and am afraid that with all the words I've cut out (both before publishing it, and following suggestions) that the meaning is lost. But I sometimes have trouble seeing around my own work. Does this look like anything more than a poem about sex?
by White_Feather on June 2 2007