Skip to main content Help Control Panel
Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
More in The Mechanics of Sex and Life The Mechanics of Sex and Life
You certainly have carried the metaphor fully forward. The weakest line is the next-to-last. Perhaps "- finally spontaneously - " would sound better - at least to my ear.
Otherwise, this is simultaneously engaging for its imagary and thought-provoking with its ideas. Alcuin
|