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Oh baby, I bet there's a throbbing muffler involved here somewhere.

Technical... ahem... I like your petitioning start, then the progression to bolder suggestions, though you keep up the questioning (I bet you've spent plenty of time on your knees).  "as we blister sunny fields of flowers" is a particularly cool line.  

I think the wavy thing after wave might just be a bit much, but then I have a prejudice against punctuation.

by Leanne on May 31 2007