Snortin Norton

Like Stephen all I can think of now is Norton's Nose!

Okay, first Stanza, awesome.

Second stanza, in L3 something is missing for some reason. When I read I get stuck, I don't know, how about "With his streched out hose like nose"?

Regarldess this is great Jen, I'd love to see pictures with this!
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