Snortin Norton

Snortin Norton blew his nose
Blew so hard he curled his toes
Curled his toes and stretched his nose
Stretched his nose out like a hose

Snortin Norton blew his hose
Blew so hard off went his toes
Off went his toes and his nose
Where they went nobody knows

I am less enamored of this part. You lost the pattern at the end -- which I suppose is fine, but my asthetic tells me you should have stuck with it.  I also question the first line of S2 -- I think, you might want to move the story part of this forward a bit more.  It's the leap from nose to hose that isn't confusing, but i'm picky and i wanted something different.

I dunno. Anyways.. Thank you. I"m now sitting here thinking about this punk-ass Nortin.

Snortin Nortin blew and blew
blew and blew til he turned blue
he turned blue wouldn't you knew
whouldn't you knew his toes did too

• stephan