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As I'm sure you already know, this is my favourite sonnet form and you've done it very well indeed. I'm not keen on the trochee you've slipped into L9, I'd suggest a fix there, but otherwise the meter's a pleasure to read. Trippingly off the tongue, in fact 
I am delighted to see you're still hanging around, and I'd like to offer my very warmest congratulations.
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by Leanne on May 23 2007