Wedding Sonnet

Brides are notoriously difficult. I recommend trading in for a Harley. However, if you've already procured the bride, this sonnet will probably suffice to assuage her more insane romantic tendencies.

On a serious note, in the first line the choice of 'our' instead of 'the' seemed a tiny bit curious, since it switches immediately to a third person view rather than that first person plural. 

Good meter and the rhyme and meter seem to work well to me. 

• stephan