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First I like the poem, very spiritual in nature and I like the images, but I agree with Jen how it should be split into stanzas and I'm not sure about having the poem centered.
This poem has great potential of brilliance.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
This poem has great potential of brilliance.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shannon McEwen on May 20 2007