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I really like this Andrew. Like Alan, I think the revelation at the end is what really makes this piece and the ending is a complete suprise to the reader. I like that you kept the romantic sweetness going until the very end. I like that you didn't hint at the twist at the end either, it made the whole thing more potent!
by Laurie Blum on Jan. 9 2012