Snowfall

In addition to Derma's sonic appreciation, I was particularly taken with S3, in which you manipulate
orientation, allowing the reader to experience the 'shores' of night from a vertical perspective, as
though 'falling' through the stanza with the snow, one of those occasions on which a choice of
adverb can exert a strong influence on the reception of imagery :>

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