May 16, 2025
More in Man of the House Man of the House
I'm not understanding S3, the first 6 lines. Are the dashes related? Do they wrap a semantic package, or does the semi-colon pair up with the first dash in closing that subordinate structure?
And a Q regarding the following passage:
had me mouthing “never agains”
almost as sincerely false
as his broken record of promised abstinence
in appreciating the double-take for 'broken record', I wonder if that passage might be sharpened by omitting the rather obviously oxymoronic 'sincerely false' with something like 'with a sincerity matched (only)/by his broken record...'?
by Laura doom on Dec. 8 2009
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