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I think Leanne has given you some wonderful critiques on your poetry. If meter is a little difficult for you right now, you could always do syllable counts per line and try to make them an equal number. Also "articles" are always unstressed, "a, and, the, or, at", so you could always sprinkle them in when needed to create smoother meter-like flow. I shall sit in judgement, you accuse all mankind (12 syllables) syllable revision below, kinda changes the intent though: I shall sit in judegement and accuse all mankind I shall write all their laws, then convict all I find
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