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Hi Yeah anything you can do to help is a welcome gesture, I like what youve done with the narrative turning it into a poem, as for the other poems, I hear ya and if you have time and are interested please I will take any help from you, Ive only been writing poems for about 3 months so im very much a rookie and very much addicted, I thought these would be published fro all to read so I guess im doing soething wrong as they are meant to be in public, so i will try to hit the right button but if they are still wrong next time ay look do that magic that you do and make em public.........the bad grammar in the one poem is a typo type error, I have lots of other poems that i think are better i can post too, and i welcome your critique crticism or help ok, thanks  Dan C