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Laura and Derma, thank you for the input:) When I wrote this I had iambic pentameter running through my thought processes, and it did affect the grammar and muttled what I was trying to convey. I wasn't sure at the time if I could part from the iambic rhythm in places.
by Sinnaminsun on Nov. 7 2009