Dirty queen

Oh, I do like this -- you have some brilliant ideas.  I love "God watches a movie with clowns" and the shifts in tone between the stanzas. 

I think "the silence of the loneliness" is not quite right though.  It's almost too obvious.  Also, do you think you need a comma or line break between green and red in the first stanza, or are the dragons green-red?  (I don't even know what that colour could be, but it could be an interesting paradox). 

Daniela, please do post more, your voice is refreshing and fascinating.