A Day Like Every Other

I've looked at this a number of times.  I like the current version better than the previous ones, but I really don't know what to say. It seems to need a center, or a more tightly developed concept to pull all the elements into a more dynamic tension.  I don't know.  So, if I don't know, maybe I should just keep my yap shut, eh? Anyway, lots of good language in here, but I'm having trouble seeing the whole picture.