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Secret Love Poem
First, I like this, like the images, especially the white out.
The second stanza needs to be sharper, it seems a little wordy to me, it distracts from the great line "Like words beneath white out"
Hope that helps
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shannon McEwen on Apr. 29 2009