Logan goes to School - rough draft

Your very own illustrator! How cool is that? As cool as I am uncool for saying that, at least :>

Anyway, yes, I appreciate your need for repetition. Perhaps there are places where you could deal with the rhythmic stuff by removing the repeated words, then add them back once you're happy with the way it flows. The repetitive phrases are usually less disruptive if they appear at (alternating) ends of lines, & much less so at the end of stanzas.

It's a pleasure Shan - I think it will work out well...

(I used to have nightmares about that  fan-wagging amazon)