Through Strength And Weakness

 Hi Jasmine,

Honestly, I'm  not sure. I do like what you have here.  I just wasn't sure where you were going with those last 2 lines.  It reads fine to me as it is now, but if there was an idea you were going for with those last 2 I think you could still develop it.  Sorry, that doesn't sound too helpful huh?  

I am looking forward to meeting you next week at the poetry festival. 

Colleen