Juggling Joe And His Talented Toe

Comment inspired from Jen

"
Hi again,

I have one more question then I'll stop bothering you guys.

Which stanza do you like better:

Spaghetti and meat balls
He'd slurp up each bite
Scrambling an egg
With bacon in flight

OR

Spaghetti and meat balls
He'd bounce off his toe
While scrambling an egg
And kneading bread dough

"

i prefer the action of bacon in flight visually far more than kneading dough.

for that reason alone, i'd go with it. One tends to assume you are eventually going to get this illustrated, and I think eyeing illustrateable verbs makes sense.

stephan

by Anstey on Apr. 20 2007