Juggling Joe And His Talented Toe

Thanks Tracey and Derma! 

I really appreciate your comments and suggestions.

When I read it outloud it seems to flow pretty smoothly but since I wrote it, it's hard for me to tell.  I think a few more stanzas would be make the story more visually appealing for an illustrator to work with too.

Since you both are having rhythm problems, there must be some.  I've been researching what editors are looking for with rhyming picture book and now I'm more confused then before.  Some say that each line has to have the exact same count while others say the rhythm flows better with similar counts but not exact.

I guess I'm just plain confused