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I don't have as much technical advice to offer as Anstey, but I can tell you that I love the core of this. As a person who seems to need much more space than my beloveds (friends and family alike), I appreciate the acknowledgement that space is, in fact, a part of healthy relationships!
Love the ending. The older I get, the more I find that dear friends with whom I've lost touch tend to pop up again as if no time has passed. It's a beautiful thing. Go back and tell me more, give me more details (in showing, not telling). Yes, revisit the idea of the mobius strip and see how you can get more mileage out of it.
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